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User/dominic/telemetry-teaser #333

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const [battery, setBattery] = useState(NaN);
const [speed, setSpeed] = useState(NaN);
const [weather, setWeather] = useState(50);
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Please use explicit type definitions

const [speed, setSpeed] = useState(NaN);
const [weather, setWeather] = useState(50);

const [range, setRange] = useState(NaN);
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Do we need to create a separate state variable for range here? Can't we just calculate range from battery speed and weather state variables? Remember, when you update any state variable, it will cause your component (App.tsx) to re-render(unless you use useMemo/useCallback hooks, will get to this in a future lesson hopefully), and update all variables.

<SpeedInput />
<BatteryInput />
<SpeedInput speed={speed} setSpeed={setSpeed} />
{isNaN(speed) && <p className="text-red-500">Speed is Required</p>}
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When the app first loads, this message shouldn't be showing

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<BatteryInput battery={battery} setBattery={setBattery} />
{isNaN(battery) && (
<p className="text-red-500">Battery is Required</p>
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When the app first loads, this message shouldn't be showing

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const BatteryInput = () => {
interface props {
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Please capitalize props

@@ -1,4 +1,9 @@
const SpeedInput = () => {
interface props {
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Please capitalize props

@@ -1,4 +1,9 @@
const WeatherInput = () => {
interface props {
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Please capitalize props

@@ -8,7 +13,7 @@ const WeatherInput = () => {
type="range"
min="0"
max="100"
value="50"
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You should be using controlled inputs here, let's say we have add some function in App.tsx that runs setWeather(12), would the slider be updated to reflect the change?

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{!isNaN(range) && (
<p text-white>The predicted range of the Eylsia is {range} km</p>
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Fix your output to 3 decimal places

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