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-    "# Writing high frequency trajectories when event is detected\n",
-    "In this tutorial we will showcase how dupin's on-line capabilites can be used to triger\n",
-    "HOOMD's burst writer to dump very high resolution trajectory dump but only of the event\n",
-    "that dupin detects. This approach carries some important consequnces for performance and\n",
-    "storage. The purpose of such approach is to only write to disk parts of trajctories of\n",
-    "interest at extremenly tight frequency, but instead of dumping the whole trajctory we\n",
-    "only dump part of the trajectory around the event detected by dupin.\n",
-    "\n",
-    "To enable this we make a temporary buffer that stores trajectory frames in memory and\n",
-    "when dupin triggers this buffer is dumpeed onto the disk. On line detection requires\n",
-    "some CPU cycles to run every so often, which can impact performance based on order\n",
-    "parameters used for detection. In practice, it is often enough to track very simple\n",
-    "properties that are computed by the MDdriver (this case HOOMD) anyways, such as pressure\n",
-    "or total system energy or volume (depending if we run NVT/NVE or NPT).\n",
-    "\n",
-    "Here we give one such example:\n"
+    "# Writing High-Frequency Trajectories When an Event is Detected\n",
+    "\n",
+    "In this tutorial, we will showcase how Dupin's online capabilities can be used to\n",
+    "trigger HOOMD's burst writer to dump high-resolution trajectory data only during\n",
+    "specific events detected by Dupin. This approach has significant implications for\n",
+    "performance and storage. The main advantage is that it allows us to write to disk only\n",
+    "the segments of the trajectory that are of interest, at an extremely high frequency,\n",
+    "without dumping the entire trajectory.\n",
+    "\n",
+    "To achieve this, we create a temporary buffer that stores trajectory frames in memory.\n",
+    "When Dupin triggers, this buffer is dumped onto the disk. Online detection requires some\n",
+    "CPU cycles to run periodically, which can impact performance of the MD program depending\n",
+    "on the order parameters used for detection. In practice, it is often sufficient to track\n",
+    "very simple properties that are computed by the MD driver (in this case, HOOMD) anyway,\n",
+    "such as pressure, total system energy, or volume (depending on whether we are running\n",
+    "NVT/NVE or NPT ensembles).\n",
+    "\n",
+    "Here, we provide an example:"
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